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ADVANCED ARTIST CRITIQUE *HELP*

Journal Entry: Mon Apr 7, 2008, 8:38 PM
  • Mood: Content
  • Listening to: Terrible music
  • Reading: Strange fanfics
  • Watching: Transformers G1
  • Playing: Halo 3 again.
  • Eating: Butter Chicken
  • Drinking: Xynergy



I've recently been attempting to add more dynamics to my artwork. More perspective, style and fun.
Although I feel like I'm not capturing what I want.
I hardly ever get critique on my artwork anymore, its soo rare. Someone may point out a proportional mistake, which I do appreciate, but what I really need to know is how I can make the picture BETTER.
Please people, don't apologize for giving me critique, don't be shy. Just give it to me straight.
Send me links, images, ref whatever to show me how to get better. How to make the picture far more interesting.

So this is what I need from some of my watchers. I need critique. Honest, harsh red lined critique.
On msn even, before I finish the picture.
Someone experienced in perspective/dynamics would be really awesome.
I feel too shy to ask big name artists for help, as I'd seem like just another noob mooch. At least thats how I've been treated.
Most of the artists just ignore me.
I'm sure they get a million notes a day asking the same thing I am though, so I won't hold it against them.

I need to get better! And even though I can't see a lot of mistakes in my art I have a great eye for critique on other peoples, thats usually how it goes. So it would be great to establish some "artist friendships"
I'll scratch your back if you scratch mine.
I can give you constructive, honest, frank critique as well. I'll red line, send pictures, etc. I just need some help.

I feel like I'm not getting better, I'm just staying in the same spot.
So please, give me some wisdom, don't be shy, don't be intimidated. Just speak up. I need it!
My msn is foxfire_gamer@hotmail.com
If you've got some good experience under your belt, add me so we can help each other.

Also, a big thanks goes out to all my watchers that DO critique me, comment me. Faves mean a lot as well, but I just REALLY appreciate comments. Faves seem empty, its like "oh I like it, but I wont tell you what it is I like about it"
lol I hope that doesn't sound terribly greedy :(

Thanks for everyones help <3 Lots of love to my watchaaa's

~Mei





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Devious Information

  • Current Age: 21
  • Current Residence: In KnightsFaith's pants
  • Interests: Gaming, Cosplay, Character Creation, Teaching Art, Clothing Design
  • Favourite movie: Transformers, Voices of a distant star, anything with sharp art and a good story.
  • Favourite genre of music: Anything with interesting lyrics and a good beat! Jaa
  • Favourite artist: Micheal Turner, Tetsuya Nomura, Hyung-tae Kim, Takuya Fujima, Joe Mad, Robert Bateman, LastScionz
  • Operating System: Dell, Pentium 4, Windows XP.
  • MP3 player of choice: Sony - PSYC
  • Wallpaper of choice: Anything that catches my eye
  • Favourite game: Final Fantasy Series, Persona 2, Thousand Arms, legend of mana, Xenosaga, Silent Hill series. RPGS!
  • Favourite cartoon character: Orochimaru, The Maxx, Vegeta, Guu, Hale's mom! Majin Buu, Knuckles, Prowl, Bumblebee
  • Personal Quote: Test yourself. Challenge yourself. Be yourself. And your art will blossom.
  • Tools of the Trade: Tech pencil, Sakura brand pigment liners, Photoshop 7.0, Painter 9 and a Intuos 3 Graphics tablet.

Devious Comments

*Tsuyoki:iconTsuyoki: 2 days 5 hours ago
Thank you so much for the watch!

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~Lyndarsia:iconLyndarsia: 3 days 7 hours ago
You are most welcome! Yes, we share the same likes and whatnot. :)

And, I have watched the TF series whenever I can. I actually love it. The humor, cartoony structure. (I am -planning- on doing a picture for it later on today.. but, it all depends. XD ) It's great. And, it is funny about the Archie comics. I used to by them from book 14 all the way up to 16-something or another. The art work was so much greater back then. I miss it. The story-line too. It's just become so.. blah here lately.

And, I have been watching him for quite some time. He's an awesome artist, isn't he? His art inspires me so much.

And, once again! You are welcome! XD

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Be full of love for others, following the example of Christ who loved you and gave Himself to God as a sacrifice to take away your sins.

Ephesians 5:2
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*SiegeRedwolf:iconSiegeRedwolf: 3 days 8 hours ago
:D aw thanks. I'm glad you like my works, thanks for the watch as well.
Seems like your into all the same things as I am/was.
Have you been watching the tf animated series?
Sonic is what originally inspired my artwork, back in the day archie comics brought out sonic/knuckles comics. The art was so inspiring I couldnt help but start drawing. Have you read them?
You can see some of the cover works done by a fellow DA artist, :iconjayaxer: deep within his gallery. You might like his works. Good stuff.

btw thanks again :D

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Never give up on your art, if it's in you never let go of it.
Even in the darkest of times, when nothing is working out, take a break, cuz the lights still there.
Wait for it, and give it all you've got.
~Lyndarsia:iconLyndarsia: 3 days 15 hours ago
Alright. I have thought, and thought for a single word that would fit your artwork. And, after wringing out my brain three times, all I could come up with is awesome. As well as a fellow Transformers fan! That's awesome as well.

The cleanliness and crispness of your art is wonderful. Even inspires me. Great work, and keep up with it!

Oh, by the by, your webcam amused me quite a bit.

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:pray:
Be full of love for others, following the example of Christ who loved you and gave Himself to God as a sacrifice to take away your sins.

Ephesians 5:2
:pray:
*fuchsiart:iconfuchsiart: 4 days 19 hours ago Mood: Love
thankyouuuuu for the :+fav: :D :dance:

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~TaKaGIR111:iconTaKaGIR111: May 9, 2008, 7:06:45 AM
Hey, maybe you wanna do my South Park meme.

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~Momoko89:iconMomoko89: Apr 28, 2008, 3:07:29 AM
ahah!!!your webcam is awesome lol

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*Mythka:iconMythka: Apr 24, 2008, 10:33:13 PM
Thanks for the Fav! :D
~khaamar:iconkhaamar: Apr 23, 2008, 8:18:14 AM
Thanks for watching (: Great gallery!

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~PvtWaffles:iconPvtWaffles: Apr 7, 2008, 4:55:51 PM
Hay. You.
Where you been.
Why havent you been playing your Xbox Hm?
I need to pwn you.
:3
Seriously though hows the life going ok? Wheres the buttface Adrian XD

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~Lemiel14N3:iconLemiel14N3: Apr 5, 2008, 12:28:32 PM
great stuff, a little too much yaoi for my taste, but fantastic stuff.
*switchblade0739:iconswitchblade0739: Apr 4, 2008, 10:43:48 AM
Hi, thanx for the fav...appreciated
*BrandyRosa:iconBrandyRosa: Apr 4, 2008, 6:31:45 AM
Thank you so much for adding me to your watchlist :)

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Who is behind you?
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*TheMinttu:iconTheMinttu: Apr 2, 2008, 1:25:30 PM
Thank you very much for the favourite :) :hug:

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=BiggCaZ:iconBiggCaZ: Apr 1, 2008, 12:39:13 PM
:bow:

I'll try not to disappoint.

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~daruma123:icondaruma123: Mar 26, 2008, 7:27:05 PM
thanks for the fav and watch :)
~HellHound69:iconHellHound69: Mar 24, 2008, 5:49:48 PM
great work man ur badass
~Isika:iconIsika: Mar 24, 2008, 4:12:16 PM
Your very welcome!

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IF ALL ELSE FAILS...KICK IT!
*switchblade0739:iconswitchblade0739: Mar 21, 2008, 4:14:20 PM
Hi, thanx for the fav....appreciated
*SHIRA5:iconSHIRA5: Mar 19, 2008, 7:36:49 AM
Hi! :D

Thanks for the :+fav: you gave me in january ;P

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~Yosh9:iconYosh9: Mar 14, 2008, 11:52:05 AM
thnks for the fav <3 I watch u now. : U

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~kylelover52610:iconkylelover52610: Mar 13, 2008, 12:54:47 PM Mood: Wow!
Ho'shit, awesome gallery. :)

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~Moon-Water-Dragon:iconMoon-Water-Dragon: Mar 13, 2008, 10:22:25 AM
no problem^.^ i hope to see more.
*Rikona:iconRikona: Mar 12, 2008, 9:16:02 PM
thanks for the fav ^^

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*Caliber316:iconCaliber316: Mar 12, 2008, 5:43:08 AM
Thanks for the devwatch :) Wonderful work here!

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